Sunday, December 30, 2012


PARAGRAPH WRITING
Topic:

My Unforgettable Childhood Memory
Topic Sentence
Bedwetting is the most embarrassing childhood memory in my entire life.
Supporting Details
-         Often get bedwetting when child but people say it is normal among children.

-         Embarrassing because my brother does not experience bedwetting except me.

-         Always drink too much water before sleep and keep get a nightmare.

-         Parents need to wash bed sheet every time and frequently change the mattress.
Conclusion
It is so embarrassing me but I am glad had funny and shameful of that experience in my childhood memory.
Linkers/sequence connected used
Yet, Nevertheless, However, All in all.

Paragraph:
          Bedwetting is the most embarrassing childhood memory in my entire life. I am often get bedwetting when I am child but people say that is normal situation happen among the children. Yet, it is embarrassing because my brother does not experiencing this kind of bedwetting except me. Nevertheless, I did not know why it happens to me but maybe because I am always drink too much water before sleeps and keep get a nightmare. However, my parents need to wash my bed sheet every time I get bedwetting and frequently change the mattress. All in all, it so embarrassing me but I am glad had a funny and shameful of that experience in my childhood memory.

(116 words)

No comments:

Post a Comment